i saw the first starwar movie (episod 4) when i was 11. i went with a couple of elementary school friend to a cheap movie theater near the sa-dang station. the movie was a bit hard to understand some part of it but since then i loved the movie. the best one is spisode 5 the empire strikes back. i was happy to see the end of the saga but i was also sad it finally ends here. episode 3 is actually well done. the plot line is so dense it is no the kind of movie you watch it once. i think i will watch it one more when i go to vancouver next month. ;) when i saw episode 1, i knew that palapine(?) is the future emperor. it was so obvious if you know what i mean.... ----- pictor please see if yyou can spot any error in my english. ^^ iLUSiON - le plus grand de tous http://cyworld.nate.com/ilusion --------------- 문제가 몇개가 있어요. movie라는 단어를 너무 많이 사용하고 있어요. 똑같은 단어가 자주 나오면 사람들이 답답해 하죠. === i saw the first starwar movie (episod 4) when i was 11. i went with a === couple of elementary school friend to a cheap movie theater near === the sa-dang station. I saw the first starwar move(episode IV) when I was 11. I saw it at a cheap move theater neer the sa-sang station with a couple of my elemenrary school friends. 왜 이렇게 바꿨냐 하면, '친구들이랑 사당역 근처 영화관에 갔다'라는 사실이 너무 애매해서... '난 사당역 근처 영화관에서 episode IV를 봤었다'라고 clearly말해주는 것이 좋을 듯 해요. === the movie was a bit hard to understand some part of it but since then ==== i loved the movie. the best one is spisode 5 the empire strikes back. The episode IV was a bit hard to understand. (some part of it은 빼자구요. 왜냐하면 영화를 이해하기 힘들다는 것은 어차피 some part of it을 이해하지 못한다는 것을 내포하기 때문에.. 굳이 넣겠다면 Some part of the episode IV was a bit hard to understand.라고 하는 것이 좋겠어요.) But since then(난 왠지 from then on을 하고 싶긴한데) I became a fan of the starwars series.(왠지 love the movie라는 말이 이상해서 fan이 되었다라고 하는 것이 읽는 사람들에게 편할 것 같네요. 왜냐하면 영화를 사랑하다?라는 것이 뭘 말하는지 이상하기도 하고요... 그리고 starwars팬들이 많은 세상에서 나도 스타워즈 팬이야!하고 아부를 떨어주면.. 읽는 사람들이 좋아할 꺼 아니오?) The best episode of the starwars series,I think, is the episode V, the empire strikes back. (왜 I think를 넣었나면 '내 생각에는'이라는 말을 넣어서.. 혹시 '왜 씨발 VI가 best냐'고 따지고 드는 상황을 사전에 없애기 위함입니다.) == i was happy to see the end of the saga but i was also sad it finally ends == here. episode 3 is actually well done. the plot line is so dense it is no == the kind of movie you watch it once. i think i will watch it one more === when i go to vancouver next month. ;) I was happy to see the end of the saga but I was also sad it finally ends here.에 대해서는 제가 영화냉용이 뭔지 잘 몰라서 아무말 못하겠구요. Episode III was also a good one. (왜 느닫없이 III를 이야기하는지 헷갈리지만) The plot line of it was so dense that it was not the kind of movies I watched before. 환상은 '니들이 전에 봤던 영화랑 다르다'라고 했는데, 환상이 다른 사람들이 전에 무슨영화를 봤는지 알지 못할 것이므로 남들한테 '니들이 전에 봤던 영화랑 다르다'라고 감히 말하지 말고 그냥 'III는 내가 전에 봤던 영화랑 확실히 다르더라' 라고 겸손하게 말해야 함. 'I think I will'은 이거 잘못된 것 같음. I will에는 이미 I think가 들어가 있음. 그러므로 I'm going to watch it once again when I go to Vancuver next month. === when i saw episode 1, i knew that palapine(?) is the future emperor. it ==was so obvious if you know what i mean.... 왜 또 느닫없이 I이야기를 하시는지... When I saw the episode I, I could expect that the palapine would become the emperor at the future. It was so obvious that I think you know what I mean. ----- === pictor please see if yyou can spot any error in my english. ^^ === iLUSiON - le plus grand de tous http://cyworld.nate.com/ilusion 환상은 It .. so A that B. 이런 구문을 몇번 사용했는데, 이 구문에서 that은 생략될 수 있다고 하나, 무식한 한국사람인 pictor는 that이 빠지면 답답해서 저는 다 다시 집어넣었음.