Guest, I read yours and revised one from Calvin and would like to make a quick comment. Like you mentioned, cultural difference (historical background, landscape, food, climate and 뀉..) made the different choice of words. And yet, in your essay you only have one example (landscape) to prove your point. It would be more clear to the readers if you approach it with more examples (historical background,, food, climate and �...). I am sure you can find some (I can뭪 think of any at this point). -living in nature