> i would like to apology to any members of kids if you have been offended
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to APOLOGIZE
> by my posting regarding korean history. from the beginning when i wrote about
> "lee-jo-sun" in guest, i never intended to go this far believe me or not. ^^
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as a guest , believe it or not.
(Don't forget the comma at
the start)
> my intention was simply that i wanted to show that the name
> "lee-jo-sun" is not tainted with any japanese colonial influence.
> being in kids for more than 5 years now, i always find it strange that
> kids members are so sensitive about anything japanese. Even a small hint
> of injustice in part of koreans are vigorously defended at all cost
^^^
is
*A small hint are??? =)*
> regardless of my argument.
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1. The word 'regardless' doesn't require the word 'of.'
The correct usage is: regardless my argument
2. Meaning here? what is the relationship between 'anything japanese' and
'injustice in korean part?' *It makes no sense*
> Not a single substancial counter argument against me was mounted except the
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spelling. 'substantial'
> usual emotional boiling. The problem with koreans incluing me is the hot
> temper. but then i should have selected more reserved words and shouldn't
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> directly attack the inferiority of koreans.
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Tense? ("Shouldn't have directly attacked" seems to be the right one.)
> I do not claim I am an expert on korean history and never will be one.
> My knowledege in this matter is limited to what I have read but then history
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on this matter, or regarding this matter
> is not very objective science. So far I have only expressed my own
> interpretation of korean history which is nothing to be shamed of but at the
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ashamed? hmmm.
> same time nothing so superior compared to other civilization. Somebody may
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'superior to' is just enough.
*"compared" is redundant here, since the word "superior" already implies
the context of its usage.*
> agree to my interpretation of korean history even if they disprove my
> outrageous methods.
> For A,B button problem, if I press A, i will die and if I press B, then
> the rest of people except me die which button I should choose ? Well,
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run-on sentence. chop it up in the middle somewhere. =)
> I will choose A and I sincerely believe that everyone should do the same.
> Isn't this what we hear all the time from Jejus and Budda ?
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Spelling: Jesus Buddha
Gee. kids in ESL class do better than this!! Shouldn't you take some ESL
class yourself?
Another advice. Write in Korean if you want to apologize to 'Koreans.'
난 시그 싫어. >(